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托福TPO30 独立写作试题：
It is more enjoyable to have a job and you work only three days a week with long hours rather than work five days a week with shorter hours.
托福满分作文-范文赏析：
The mode of working among employees is usually a question how efficient and how possible accomplishing a task can be. How long employees should spend at work often times depends on the kind of work and company system, where at times workers do work for longer hours but fewer workdays while others take on short hours for more workdays. I do partake working for long hours for fewer workdays.
It’s plausible to applaud working for longer hours for fewer days because such long hours breed ample time to make good concentration on what is being done. In this case, a task can be effectively and efficiently furnished rather than short hours in which an employee will have to panic to accomplish a task within a short time. At the end, efficiency is suffocated at the expense of just accomplishing a task. Thus the motive of working will surely be eroded.
Suffice to note is that long working hours for fewer days proffers abounding time for employees to reanimate themselves and have an invigorating start. Workers with ample time to rest and do exercises or other things unrelated to their jobs do find it easier to start a new task at work with a fresh and unyielding esteem. Many workers do become inefficient because of exhaustion and lack of free time to relax. Working for short hours five days a week might not guarantee adequate time for relaxation.
Imperatively, employees are humans and do hold personal issues that can be catered for during the full days they are not at work. Working for three days a week leaves a number of days in which they can address their personal issues like making personal advancement in education and indulging in family affairs. One most common problem modern workers do have is alienation from their families because of long working hours every day. This not only causes mental stress, but also affects family ties. Working for three days and resting the rest of the week renders such time to cater for one's personal issues.
Still worthy to note, longer working hours for three days do evoke expertise among employees. Employees that have more hours on doing the same thing will surely develop superlative skills and deftness in what they do and as time goes by, work becomes a piece of cake. Long hours will give employees enough time to exhaust their skills and understanding of a task in which case they develop the best ways of taking on a task. It would be hard for an employee who works for short hours a day to utilize the best of his or her skills to become dexterous.
By and large, though toiling for long hours a day for three days a week might be drudgery, causing exhaustion and stress for a given day, merits like having ample time to rest for the rest of the week, time to cater for personal issues, room for self improvement and ability to become an authority do surpass such minute demerits and I would gladly embrace working for long hours for three days a week than short hours for five days.
托福作文满分要素剖析:
一、语言表达
本文的句式结构较为复杂，多用长句。而且使用了很多并列句和从句，让句子篇幅变长但逻辑更加清晰，体现出了作者高超的语言驾驭能力。每一段的开头句作者都进行了认真的雕琢，既有常见关联词的替换，例如by and large,又有特殊句式的使用，例如suffice to not is that，体现出了作者的语言功力。在用词方面，作者多次使用到了
1. In this case, a task can be effectively and efficiently furnished rather than short hours in which an employee will have to panic to accomplish a task within a short time. In this case在这样的情况下。Furnish是completed/finished的同义改写。In which是定语从句，修饰hours。
2. One most common problem modern workers do have is alienation from their families because of long working hours every day. Do 在此处表示强调，没有实际含义。Alienation表示疏远和离间。此处表示疏远家人。
3. Employees that have more hours on doing the same thing will surely develop superlative skills and deftness in what they do and as time goes by, work becomes a piece of cake. That一直到will前面的部分都是定语从句修饰employee雇员。Develop skill是一个固定搭配，表示发展技能。Superlative和deftness这两个词语分别表示最好的和熟练，都是GRE单词，用的非常精彩。A piece of cake又略显俏皮，让文章显得更亲切自然。
二、 逻辑结构
本文是总分总的结构。首先提出了总观点，更喜欢工作天数少，每天多工作一些时间。中间部分提出了四条分论点分别证明观点。它们之间是并列的关系。都从这样做的好处的角度来进行证明。最后总结重申了观点。
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