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托福TPO 22 独立写作试题：
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
托福满分作文-范文赏析：
Normally teachers are supposed to guide students to learn knowledge and help them to build an independent mind. What should teachers do to gain these goals? Should teachers share their social and political views with students in the classroom? Some people are against it because they think saying something like that in a classroom will waste the time of learning something useful, while some others think it would help students to gain a better understanding of the world. As for me, I believe that whether to teach something about the society or politics depends on what age of the students one is teaching and what lessons it is.
To begin with, let us talk about young children who study in elementary schools and high schools. The students at such young age are too young to understand social and political views of a society. They cannot fully understand what the teachers are talking about but accept it without any independent thinking. Instead of talking about social or political views, it is wiser for teachers to get the facts known by students and ask what they are thinking about them. As for students in high school, teachers need to pay more attention to how to let them gain more knowledge and facts by themselves and try to give opinions by themselves. Teachers should do their best to build an atmosphere for students to discuss with others so that all students can gain better understanding of what is discussed.
However, as for students who are studying at universities, teachers should include some social and political events during class. We know that students at university are old enough to distinguish good and bad things. It is time for them to think about our country, our society and of cause our government and politics. Because after graduating from university, these students will step into society which means they are going to face a challenging world. If students have obtained more information about political and social aspects, they will be able to adjust to the society more quickly. As a result, students can make more contribution to their country and also get a better living standard.
To sum up, I would like to say, people at different periods in their life should obtain different information, so whether teachers should teach something about society or politics depends on what age of the students one is teaching.
托福作文满分要素剖析:
一、 语言表达
本文的句式结构较为简单。但是每个句子的篇幅并不短小。这是因为作者将各个短句嵌套在了固定句式当中，作为从句出现。例如了let us talk about, it is time for等等。这样的做法能够使文章句式更加清楚，而且不易发生语法错误，是把文章写长的重要方法。
在用词方面，作者也并没有一味追求高级的词汇，而是使用了常用易懂的词语表达自己的观点。需要注意的是这样就更要求作者对于词语的理解和运用的熟练程度。
1. As for students in high school, teachers need to pay more attention to how to let them gain more knowledge and facts by themselves and try to give opinions by themselves. 本句用as for开头，这个短语也是转换话题和讨论对象的常用逻辑连接词。主句中gain knowledge和give opinion两个动宾搭配准确，也是写作中经常错误使用的搭配形式，应当注意一下。
2. It is time for them to think about our country, our society and of course our government and politics. It is time for sb to do sth表示到了XX的时间，是固定用法。
二、 逻辑结构
本文采用了总分总的结构，很有逻辑性。首先作者通过提出问题，列举观点表达出了这个问题的复杂性，并提出了自己的观点，即需要根据学生生的年龄而定。之后两段分别写了两个年龄段的学生，并在两段之间形成对比，即中小学生不需要，而大学生需要，对自己的观点进行了进一步的解释和说明。最后进行总结，重申了自己的观点。
网温馨提醒：考生们拿到托福作文试题，审题后，先决定总体思路，然后列出两三个具体的分论点，每个论点找出一些例子来说明。这里要注意例子的选择，尽可能生活化、生动化、形象化，不要太死板，