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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
If people only read about real events and nonfiction, that means people wouldn’t be reading half of all the great books that have ever been written, including plays, short stories and poetry. This would also seriously limit people’s imaginations and remain dulled throughout their lives.
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本段从反面来讲，如果我们不读小说，我们的想象力将会被束缚住，也就是本文的主旨。 |
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Reading stories as children helps us develop our creativity by teaching us words, ideas and how to create mental images. Reading histories of past times would serve kind of the same purpose, but it must be lackluster in comparison. Oftentimes, history will take on the legends of fiction in order to make itself appear larger than life. I think this is a testament to the power of imagination and fiction.
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Besides, storytelling is an emotional need for human beings. From earliest times, humans have taught their children about life through stories. Some of these stories are about human nature,and help us experience a wide range of feelings. Some make us think about how we should act. Telling a child that it’s wrong to lie will make little impression, but telling him the story of a little boy whose nose grows longer every time he tells a lie will make a big impression.Fiction is too important to our culture, our minds, and our emotions to ever give up.
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本段是一个总分总的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，即读故事表达了人类感情。后面对此进行了简要分析。文段最后一句话对全文进行收束和总结，再次提出fiction的重要性。 |
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满分要素剖析
一、语言表达
本文的词汇使用灵活多变，充分展示了作者的词汇量。文章句式选择多样，但较少的使用了长难句，比起一些比较卖弄辞藻、故弄玄虚的文章来说，多了一份简介与平实，但是句式多变又使得文章及具可读性，值得大家学习借鉴。
1. If people only read about real events and nonfiction, that means people wouldn’t be reading half of all the great books that have ever been written, including plays, short stories and poetry. 该句的亮点在于虚拟语气的应用。虚拟语气在写作中的应用非常广泛。它既可以表达作者的一种推测，又可以表达对于当前现象的不满。在该句中，作者从反面入手，说出如果我们不读小说，我们的损失巨大，从而给出了本文的主旨。
2. Fiction is too important to our culture, our minds, and our emotions to ever give up. 此句最大的特点就是too…to结构的应用，”too +形容词/副词+动词不定式”结构简称为too…to结构。这种结构是英语中非常常见与地道的表达，在大多数情况下表示否定意义。此句中运用此句型重点说明了fiction的重要性
二、逻辑结构
文章是一个正正的大正型支持结构，文章直接明了的从读小说的两点好处进行切入，帮助作者递进地展开全文，各个正面段落论述严谨，论证充分。段落间作者运用了明确的关联词语，如beside，使得文章逻辑脉络清晰流畅。
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