让步+转折(重申立场)
如此一来,如果我们反对
应用到实际的题目中:
The only way for the government to promote energy conservation is to raise the price of gasoline and electricity.
Admittedly, we have to admit that raising the price of gasoline and electricity can reduce the usage amount, which will promote energy conservation, to some extend. However, it is not a effective and fundamental way to solve the problem entirely. We should figure out other effective ways, such as developing new energy and advertising environmental awareness.
重申立场+总结理由
这种方法很容易理解,就是先陈述一下对于整篇文章的看法,表明中心论点。然后列出你的文章中来支撑中心论点的分论点,这一步其实就是把文章前面的分论点的主题句进行paraphrase(改述)。
比如这道托福写作题目:
The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.
In conclusion, we can not live out money of our daily life in this modern society. When all things are considered, we have to admit that money is the most important aspect of a job. Since money can not only guarantee our basic material life but also ensure that we can solve problems with it timely when we have some accidents.
最后一种:重申立场+引申扩展
其中, 引申扩展可以包括:
1. 强调反对的立场带来的严重后果。
2. 展望未来问题的前景。
3. 强调自己观点的重要性。
具体例题:
We should never be impolite in the modern society.
Being polite to others is not only a good virtue but also good opportunities for us to make new friends that will pay back us more benefits in the future. So, in most of cases, we should be polite to others. But if we are polite when violated or threatened by some bad men, the situation will just get worse.
上面的托福写作辅导介绍了如何能写出一个完美的托福独立写作结尾,如果在托福写作中开头结尾都非常精彩,不仅能给人一个完美的开始,结束后还能让人有所回味,这样的分数一定不会低。