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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
Both good and bad students should have the opportunity to attend college. Everyone should have a period to learn before they begin to work and develop a career. An education is an investment in your future. All students must decide to invest real money and real time in their own futures.
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Higher education is very expensive, especially in countries like England and the US. It might seem like a waste of money to some people, especially those who are not academically strong. Still, education is a valuable investment in future career earnings. People with college degrees make more money and have more opportunities later, despite the sacrifice of money and time for their education. If people have the desire to improve their lives, who can deny them this chance?
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Higher education is also a big investment of time. Some people think a weak student should get a job and earn some money rather than study. But college is a time to meet different people and begin to define oneself as a person. The benefits of college are not limited to the sphere of education. I think that’s an experience everyone should have
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I think every student should be given a chance to see how far he/she can go. Students who got poor grades in high school might do very well in a different environment. It takes time to grow up and mature into your adult personality. College may be expensive and take time, but it’s an investment that everyone should make.
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一. 语言表达
本文不仅结构紧凑精巧，还充分展现了作者深刻的思考，由表象入手，深入剖析了高等教育的真正意义，同样引发读者的思考。
1. People with college degrees make more money and have more opportunities later, despite the sacrifice of money and time for their education. 此句中有一个由despite引导的让步状语从句，一般翻译为“尽管……”或“即使……”，就是我们日常生活中用的“退一步说……”的感觉。相似的句型有：Even though going to the university may cost us a lot, people with college degrees make more money and have more opportunities late。学习让步状语从句的关键是关联词的选用，常用的关联词有： (1)thought / although (2) as，though (3) even if, even though (4) whether…or… (5) no matter… 最后要注意的是由as引导的让步状语从句要用倒装语序。
2. Still, education is a valuable investment in future career earnings.
3. But college is a time to meet different people and begin to define oneself as a person. The benefits of college are not limited to the sphere of education. 此句进一步解释了上大学的深刻含义。非常精致。
4. But college is a time to meet different people and begin to define oneself as a person.此句从另一个观点剖析了人们上大学会得到的一处，相似的句型有In the colledge, however, we learn to define ourself as people and make different friends.
二. 逻辑结构
文章采用正正的大正论述结构，分别从两个角度来论述的，简单易懂，结构清晰。文章中举了很多例子，并且使用了对比的论证方法，比较了上大学和不上大学的利弊，进行了详尽的利弊分析，这样的论证方法和结构使得内容更加充实具体，可读性高。
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