托福写作小作文题目的转述方法

2022-05-31 05:24:56

  很多同学在写开头段的时候,在需要引用题目的时候,直接搬过来用,句式和词汇也没有变化。这样是不建议的。下面我们列举了一些如何转述作文题目的小思路,可以一起看一下。更多

  同义替换

  1.替换同义词(具体词-抽象词表达)

  2.不同句型(主动-被动)

  3.同义词+不同句型

  1.绝对词类题目(Key words:最重要)

  例如:money is the most important aspect in a job.

  看到这类题目,我们可以先替换里面的关键词如important(essential,significant等)和job(position,occupation,career等),也可以替换句型,比如:

  Money is the most important aspect in a job.

  =money is of the first importance/priority in a job/position.

  Money should be given the top priority in a job/position.

  Money should be placed highest on the priority list.

  Nothing is more important than money in terms of choosing a job.

  It is no exaggeration to attach the highest importance to money in a job/position.

  We can not emphasize the importance of money too much in terms of choosing a job.

  再比如这道题目:

  Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

  =Education should be given the top priority/placed highest on the priority list for the sake of a country’s success.

  Nothing is more important than bettering schools in terms of the smooth development of a state.

  It is no exaggeration to attach the highest importance to education in aim of a nation’s successful development.

  We can not emphasize the importance of education too much in the process of a country’s success development.

  我们再来看比较类题目,这类题目一般关键词是A比B好/重要等,所以这里我们只要把比较句式多准备一些,转述的时候就会非常简单手到擒来了。

  A比B好/重要:

  A matters more than/in comparison with B.

  A surpass B in terms of

  A overweighs B

  A is superior to B

  A is really a notch above B

  B pales/fades into insignificance in contrast with A.

  B is not as important as A

  B is dwarfed by A

  具体转述例句:

  看这道作文题目:

  It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose.

  =A secure/stable but low-paid position is superior to an unstable/insecure but high-paid position.

  A secure/stable job with a low pay surpasses/overweighs a high-paid position but is easy to lose.

  More store should be set by/on a low-paid but secure position in comparison with a easy-losing but high-paid job.

  A easy-losing but high-paid job is dwarfed by a secure job with a low pay.

  The charms of a high-paid position which is easy to lose pales/fades in contrast with a secure job with a low pay.

  More importance should be attached to a low-pay but stable job compared with a high-paid but unstable job.

  In order to celebrate major events, it’s better to organize a big party with lots of people than to have a small party where only close friends and relatives are invited.

  = Throwing/organizing/opening big parties participated/involved by a large mass of people is superior to/surpasses small parties with only close friends and relatives.

  Your job has great happiness than your social life.

  = Your job is really a notch above your social life.

  People’s social life is dwarfed by their job.

  Social life is not as important as a job.

  还有一些今昔对比的题目,这类题目一般最常见的表达是对比句式,例如:

  In violent contrast /stand in stark contrast/in striking contrast with

  具体实例:

  It is much easier for people to achieve success without their family member’s help now than in the past.

  =In absence of /without family member’s assistance/under no assistance from family members, people in modern society is easy to succeed than those in the past.

  In violent contrast with people in the past, modern people are easier to gain/attain/achieve success/become successful without help of families.

  The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.

  =standing in striking contrast with food in the past, what we eat today is relatively healthier.

  Teachers had a greater influence on young people in the past than they do today.

  =In striking contrast with teachers in the past, teachers exert more effects on youngsters nowadays.

  Teaching is harder than it was in the past.

  =Standing in stark contrast with tutoring students in the past,teaching tends to be more difficult nowadays.

(编辑:Sally)

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