托福机经:2014年6月21日托福写作真题回忆

2022-06-05 21:08:02

  2014年6月21日,希望对各位考生的备考有所帮助,祝每位烤鸭考试顺利,都能取得好成绩!

        综合写作:
Topic议题
The plan of preserving forests
  Reading Listening
Thesis总论点 For.
支持
Against.
反对
Sub-point 1
分论点1
Protect agriculture from damage. 人口增加,农民需要更多的食品,如果不能得到,会使用新的farm tech,这种tech更伤害环境比deforest伤害更多。
Sub-point2
分论点2
Payment for people living in the forest. 钱是会给forest owner,但是owner通常是政府,不是people who live in the forests,政府将不会把这笔钱给这些人,而是花在other objects
Sub-point3
分论点3
Biodiversity. 花钱都是人工种植的森林plantation forests这些都是for commercial purposes,所以物种不多,达不到promote biodiversity的目的

  独立写作:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams. 重复2011.12.2NA

  People who are successful at working in groups are hardworking, good at communicating, and good at sharing and accepting ideas. Listening to what others have to say, including their criticisms of your work, is an important part of being a successful team member.

  Group work is an important part of studying and working. By working in teams, more ideas can be shared and combined to enable more creative and successful outcomes. In my business class for example, my teacher often puts us into groups. As a group we have to create business models and advertising plans. Exchanging ideas is an important part of this assignment. Everybody contributes an idea, and we decide on the best idea for each project. If there is a team member that does not take criticism well, then it makes it harder for my group to finish its project. One time a team member, Joe, was so offended we did not take his idea that he refused to help us finish the assignment. The teacher then failed Joe for not participating.

  What is even worse, if you cannot take criticism well, then nobody will want to work with you. For one project, our teacher let us pick our own teams. Nobody wanted to work with Joe. Imagine if that was the real world? Many jobs require that you work and collaborate with other people. If nobody in your office wants to work with you, you are not likely to get assigned the most important projects by your boss.

  In addition, if you cannot take criticism well, then you will not improve. I used to play soccer when I was younger. In soccer, it is important to play as a team. When I first started playing, my coach used to yell at me all the time, because I kept on stealing the ball from my teammates. I got upset at first because I thought the coach was just being mean. My dad then talked to me after the game, and showed me how to pass and receive the ball. If I had just quit after the coach yelled at me, I would have never improved my playing or helped my team win the school championship.

  If you are able to listen to criticisms and negative comments, you are more likely to improve yourself. By improving yourself, you are more likely to find success. This is especially true if you are working with a team. Nobody wants to work with somebody who cannot exchange ideas or hear comments without getting upset. Without the support of team members, it is harder to succeed. (434 words)

 
 

 
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