托福机经:2014年8月23日托福写作真题回忆

2022-05-25 09:04:10

  2014年8月23日,希望对各位考生的备考有所帮助,祝每位烤鸭考试顺利,都能取得好成绩!

  综合写作:

Topic议题
Traffic camera
  Reading Listening
Thesis总论点 Limitations. Against.
反对
Sub-point 1
分论点1
People can only receive notification several days after violation while traffic officer can correct violators It doesn’t matter if the punishment occurs on spot or after violation. It is the drivers’ future behaviors that matter.
e.g. when traffic officers are busy with tickets, other cars would speed by, but camera can capture all cars with no exception.
Sub-point2
分论点2
People will only obey rules when they are aware that they are being monitored. Hiring traffic officers will cost lots of money but cover very limited area. Traffic camera can be set anywhere and monitors a higher proportion of road system.
Sub-point3
分论点3
Intersection traffic accidents caused by sudden brakes Such traffic accidents are minor; more serious traffic accidents have been reduced. There is a major decline in head-on and collisions at the intersection. A 40% decline in traffic accidents have been spotted.
 

  独立写作:

  - Do you agree or disagree:Young people today are more likely to invest their time and effort on improving the world than young people in the past. 【重复2013.3.3ML】

  In the past young people didn’t care about improving the world, so they never spent time improving it. That is why it is getting worse and worse. Young people today, however, care about the world very much so they are willing to invest their time in order to improve it. And the reason young people nowadays care about the world is because they still have to live in it for a long time and because they are more enlightened.

  In the past young people did not spend time improving the world, so they must not have cared about it. I don’t know why they didn’t care about it because I am young and care a lot about the world. But I know they didn’t invest their time to improve the world because there are so many problems now. If young people in the past had made the effort to improve the world, there wouldn’t be so many problems. For example, the world is now facing a serious environmental problem. If young people in the past had recycled and done other things for the environment we wouldn’t have this big problem now. It seems those young people were too busy spending time on themselves.

  Nowadays young people care very much about the world and are willing to spend their time to improve it. For example many of my friends and I often talk about the environment and we all agree we should solve the environmental problem. That is why we sometimes spend some time to clean the environment. For example, two years ago I saw some trash on the street. It would have been faster for me to walk past it. However, I decided to use some time to pick it up and put it in the trash. This shows that I care about the world and am willing to spend time to improve it.

  I think that the reason young people care about the world and want to improve it is because they still have to live in the world for many more years. We don’t want to live in a dirty world. Instead we want to live in a clean place. And since the young people from the past don’t care about the world they don’t spend time to clean it. But today’s young people are more enlightened, so they are willing to invest more time to improve the world.

  In the past young people didn’t spend their time improving the world. That is why young people today are faced with serious problems, such as the environment. But young people today are enlightened and value living their life in a clean world. They care about it so they are willing to invest their time.

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