托福机经:2014年4月12日托福写作真题与范文

2022-05-29 02:52:37
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Topic议题
Electronic medical records
电子医药记录
  Reading Listening
Thesis总论点 For.
支持
Against.
反对
Sub-point 1
分论点1
Reducing cost
减少开销
It cannot significantly reduce the cost because doctors who use electronic medical records will still have paper record backup with signatures on it.
不能 减少花销因为那些用电子版的医生会有纸质版的备份并签上面还有签名
Sub-point2
分论点2
Prevent error
减少错误。
During medical check-ups doctors will take notes and the staff type paper records into digital versions. Poor handwriting can easily be mistakenly interpreted. So errors cannot be prevented.
医生在检查时会自己记笔记然后又其他人员敲成电子版的,有些字迹不清楚的就会敲错,所以很难避免错误。
Sub-point3
分论点3
Aiding research
帮助研究。
Research can be a violation of doctor-patient confidentiality. For example, it could block the use of medicine if researchers have to go through many procedures and permission of patients, which are not generally granted.
研究中对病人信息的查看实惠违反私人医生有义务保密的条令。比如要看用药的哈,研究人员是要过很多流程的而且需要病人的允许,但这些一般不会被授予允许。
 
 

  独立写作:

  The opinions of celebrities, such as entertainers and athletes, are more important to the younger people than they are to the older people.重复2012年8月25日大陆

  Sample Answer:

  In this age of rapid technological development, in order to be the most advanced and successful, universities must keep their facilities and resources up to date. This not only attracts more students, but also attracts renowned professors to the university.

  Students now more than ever are demanding that universities provide the very latest in academics. To receive the most advanced education, advanced facilities are required. A student majoring in science cannot obtain an accredited level of experience if his university does not have the proper laboratory facilities. Likewise, a liberal arts student is equally as dependent on a current library. Progress is the main purpose of institutions of higher education. A university that does not seek to improve its facilities will fail in improving its students.

  A university that does not invest in its facilities will not only fail to produce good students, but will also fail to attract famous professors. Universities are able to attract professors because they can offer them good facilities with state-of-the-art technology so that these professors can conduct successful research and remain at the top of their respective fields. For example, a famous biology professor would think it a waste of time to teach at a university that does not at least have an electron microscope. With the proper facilities, universities can easily attract the best teachers in the world.

  There may be some university facilities, like gymnasiums, that on the outside do not have any direct connection to the success of the university’s academics. However athletics is great way to draw attention to a university. When universities get attention, they also get funding. Private donors are the main way that universities can afford to upgrade their facilities. Therefore, the more attention a university gives to its facilities, the more potential donors it will attract. This is why so many universities in American lay such great importance on their sports teams and their sports facilities.

  Universities should make updating their facilities a top priority. Having world-renown professors is important for the success and prestige of a university; however without advanced facilities, a university will not be able to attract these professors. Without advanced facilities a university will also not be able to attract many good students or even donors to help further improve the university.

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