雅思写作备考考生需要参考一些高分范文,下面小编为大家分享雅思小作文范文,大家可以学习其中的亮点句型、清晰的结构。当然还需要自己我们结合练习来掌握可以吸收的高分句型,以及得分点。下面来看看雅思小作文范文吧!
以下是其中一个题目;
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
范文:
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.
小作文(A类)经验:
为考的是A类,这里只说A类,留学生的话也建议考A类,平时写报告其实就是在练小作文,尤其是理工科。小作文对高级词汇、高级短语的要求没那么高,表达增长下降,趋势波动的词语就那么些,熟练掌握以后灵活应用就好。
当然,为了拿八分,还是可以寻找一些更高级的单词或短语,可以把所有范文拿出来,从里面总结。注意!
在一篇文章里尽量不要使用重复的词,
在一个地方用了decrease
另一个地方就换成decline
小作文考的更多的是信息归类能力以及用简洁准确的语言表达这些信息的能力;
前一点尤为重要,如果能很好的归类信息,就很容易做到表达简洁。
如果你小作文字数超了很多,很可能是信息归纳不够,导致重复与啰嗦(还有可能是写了太多不是很重要的细节信息)。
大家都知道根据图表要挑出重要信息:
把某些信息放在一段里对比
把另一些信息放在另一段里描述
我觉得这是信息归类的第一层次,也就是段落层次的归纳
更进一步的信息归纳是句子层次的,更细致的归纳;
这就需要对信息进行分析,把能放在一起说的信息放在一个句子里简洁明了地描述出来。
以上为雅思小作文范文,希望大家结合雅思练习掌握答题方法,在考试中顺利拿到高分。