今天给大家准备的雅思大作文常见话题,青少年犯罪话题的范文及思路解析,还为大家整理了常用词汇和断语,供大家学习和运用。接下来请看今天雅思内容: 雅思写作范文cook整理-青少年犯罪写作范文及解析
请见如下例文:(青少年违法之后应该如何被惩罚永远是雅思考试的常见话题)
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There is no denying that everyone should be punished due to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she is. Notwithstanding, this does not imply that juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as adult prisoners. Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much better.
Juvenile convicts with violent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social work.
PS: Juvenile detentions 名词,少管所
juvenile court 名词,未成年人法庭
detain 及物动词,羁押
1.犯罪率的表达方式
Crime rate / incident of crime
如何降低犯罪率,是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。
Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to reduce it has become prime task for those governments for a long time.
2.rehabilitate criminals / reform criminals 动宾,改造罪犯
Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second chance. ,还要给这些犯人提供一个改过自新的机会。
3.几个导致青少年犯罪的原因如下:
Lack of moral education 名词性,缺少德育教育(lack一词在实际写作中是考生们常犯错误的地方,请看后面的注解。)
Inappropriate parenting 名词性,不恰当的家庭教育
Being exposed to misleading information from media 动名词性质,暴露于媒体的诱导性信息
Lack of ability of telling right from wrong 名词性,缺少辨别是非的能力
Blindly imitate what they often see or read in media 动宾结构,盲目模仿在媒体中看到的或者听到的事物
PS: 关于lack
首先,可以是及物动词。例如:With stress from exams, students lack enthusiasm on learning any kind of art.
其次,名词,多用于词组 be lack of / be lack in = be short of 例如:Generally speaking, high crime rate, to a great extent, can be attributed to lack of law enforcement capacity of police.
再次,lacking 形容词,常用词组 be lacking of / be lacking in 例如: Fresh graduates are usually lacking in working experience that is required badly on majority of job positions.
以上为雅思内容: 雅思写作范文cook整理-青少年犯罪写作范文及解析 。望以上的写作素材能帮助到各位同学,最后也希望同学们都能取得满意的成绩。