[写作示范]
结尾：Flaws and Suggestions
Step 1: Flaws
computerized, commercial, plane’s course
In short of accuracy are three assumptions, respectively: a computerized system would efficiently perform without bugs; commercial airlines might not collide with other non-commercial airliners; and inability to know plane’s course was the main reason for former collisions.
Step 2: Suggestions
a plane, operation, flying conditions; planes, all types
A better investigation is therefore needed, which should carefully explore a plane’s operation and its flying conditions, and thoroughly list all sorts of flying objects that might cause collisions.
Step 3: Flaws + Suggestions
For a final evaluation on this article, in short of accuracy are at least three assumptions, respectively: a computerized system would efficiently perform without bugs; commercial airlines might not collide with other non-commercial airliners; and inability to know plane’s course was the main reason for former collisions. Given insufficient data to solidify these and other hypotheses, a better investigation is therefore needed, which should carefully explore a plane’s operation and its flying conditions, and thoroughly list all sorts of flying objects that might cause collisions.
(85 words)
之前已经讲过，结尾部分是把前文提到的错误或次要的在上文中未提到的细小的错误进行总结的部分。这一部分可以根据大家的剩余时间和篇幅长度而定。当然如果时间不够而篇幅还太短，大家可以从前文中摘取一两段进行加长。所以大家一定要灵活掌握。GMAT写作“画龙点睛”你学会了吗?希望小编的推荐能够对大家的GMAT写作有启发。
相关推荐: