11. 【错误句】Given different conditions of each individuals and educational resources in universities, students should be allow to choose their courses in other fields based on their own situation.
【错误1】单复数错误—each individuals改为each individual
【错误2】时态错误—allow改为allowed
【正确句】Given different conditions of each individual and educational resources in universities, students should be allowed to choose their courses in other fields based on their own situation.
【难度】错误1：简单;错误2：简单。
12. 【错误句】When it comes to the problem of jobs, someone believe in having a high salary job with more risk to lose it, while others hold that to take a low salary job but more stable.
【错误1】用词不当—problem改为issue
【错误2】用词不当—someone改为some people
【错误3】句尾词语遗漏—在stable后面加is better
【正确句】When it comes to the issue of jobs, some people believe in having a high salary job with more risk to lose it, while others hold that to take a low salary job but more stable is better.
【难度】错误1：简单;错误2：简单;错误3：困难。
13. 【错误句】We do can achieve the goal by ask candidates which books or movies they like most in order to determine their characteristic.
【错误1】文字多余—删去we do can中的do
【错误2】时态错误—ask改为asking
【正确句】We can achieve the goal by asking candidates which books or movies they like most in order to determine their characteristics.
【难度】错误1：中等;错误2：简单。
14. 【错误句】What's more, books and movies are an irresistible and absolutely useful tool to our goal.
【错误1】缩合错误—what’s more改为 what is more
【错误2】单复数错误—goal改为goals
【正确句】What is more, books and movies are an irresistible and absolutely useful tool to our goals.
【难度】错误1：中等;错误2：简单。
【备注】在正式的写作文章中，一般不进行诸如以下类别的缩写。例：what’s more应写成what is more，don’t应写成do not等等。
15. 【错误句】For myself, it is hard to image that what kind of person I will become in five years.
【错误1】选词错误--image改为imagine
【错误2】选词错误—will改为might，(因为这是一个不确定的状况)
【正确句】 For myself, it is hard to imagine that what kind of person I might become in five years.
【难度】错误1：简单;错误2：中等。
16. Cars release toxic emissions that damage our environment, hurting our environment by adding to the greenhouse effect, damaging air quality and decreasing the ozone.
【错误1】句子冗余：hurting our environment 重复 应删掉
【错误2】冠词错误：air quality 前需要添加冠词the
【正确句】Cars release toxic emissions that damage our environment by adding to the greenhouse effect, damaging the air quality and decreasing the ozone.
【难度】错误1—中等;错误2—困难
17. Are talents indispensable for people to learn a new thing? How can us achieve what we want to do?
【错误1】单复数错误：a new thing 应为 new things –表概括
【错误2】代词错误：us 应为 we – 此处应用代词的主格而非宾格
【正确句】Are talents indispensable for people to learn new things? How can we achieve what we want to do?
【难度】错误1—中等;错误2—简单
18. When we are confront with some negative situations, say, suffered from lethal illness, or lost our lovers, or any terrible happening that we have no control over, ….
这并非一个单独的句子，而是一个长句中的时间状语部分
【错误1】固定搭配错误：confront 应该是confronted –简单
【错误2-3】动词时态错误：suffered 应为 suffering;lost 应为losing
【错误4】连词错误：句中的第一个or 应当删去(第二个or应保留)
【正确句】When we are confronted with some negative situations, say, suffering from lethal illness, losing our lovers, or any terrible happening that we have no control over, ….
【难度】错误1 – 简单;错误2-3 – 困难;错误4 – 中等
19. She speaks English perfect.
【改法1】She speaks English perfectly.
【改法2】She speaks perfect English.
【难度】很简单
20. To my personal perspective, the phenomenon that modern buildings make the cities look similar is part due to globalization.
【错误1】固定搭配不当：To my personal perspective 应改为 From my personal perspective
【错误2】冠词错误：cities 前的 the 应当去掉
【错误3】副词错误：part 应改为partly
【正确句】From my personal perspective, the phenomenon that modern buildings make cities look similar is partly due to globalization.
【难度】错误1-简单;错误2-中等;错误3-中等