2016年6月18日托福写作真题答案及解析

2022-05-20 12:34:40

  2016年6月18日

  综合写作

  关于cheatgrass入侵的解决办法(Options to solve cheatgrass problem)

  阅读文章:

  1. 可以饲养食草动物(the writer claims that it is an option to encourage animals such as cattle to eat cheatgrass;);

  2. 可以放火烧掉(the writer proposes to use controlled fire eliminating cheatgrass.);

  3. 可以使用fungal parasite杀死(Thirdly, the writer states that using fungal pesticide tore strict cheatgrass.);

  听力文章:

  1. 食草动物不喜欢吃cheatgrass,所以会先吃native grass(The speaker refutes it by saying that those animals prefer to eat native plants);

  2. 大火只能烧到表面,而seeds have been pushed into soil(The speaker believes it won’t solve this problem because the seeds cannot be destroyed.);

  3. fungal parasite和cheatgrass live together for a long time,cheatgrass已经抵制攻击,这个方法只对老弱病残的cheatgrass有用(The speaker raises the fact that they have lived together for thousands years, and the fungus just work on injured cheatgrass)。

  独立写作

  此次试题出现了A,B卷

  A: A/D: To be a successful person, one must open up to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind.

  B: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should be open to new ideas and change his or her mind to be successful.

  A卷题目是绝对词类话题;B卷题目为建议类话题/二选一话题). 注意区别处理这两类题目。

  以A卷题目为例:处理此类文章需要弱化绝对词,并给出其他合理的方式。关于此题,可以按以下方式组织文章:1)开头段-主题段一(去绝对词做让步段处理,写我方的好处)-主题段二(要成功的因素1)-主题段三(要成功的因素2)-结尾段;2)开头段-主题段一(优点一)-主题段二(优点二)-主题段三(优点三)-结尾段(小让步+综合其他可以使人成功的因素)。

  Everyone is longing for success; therefore, everyone eagerly searches for every method to reach that end. Having an inclusive and open would definitely serve as a good panacea for everyone who wants to achieve something in the life. Nevertheless, it is not the only way toward one’s heyday, for one’s success derives from the combined factors, like tenacity and resilience.

  Admittedly, a man with an open mind for new ideas is half way for success, for these innovative ideas and philosophies offer one with another outlook when facing a deadlock or dilemma. What’s the most important, new idea brings about creation to our life. The modern society has witnessed the rapid and pervasive changes of technologies along with subtle social reforms. It is the new ideas from other people and other places that lead James Dyson, the inventor if G-force vacuum cleaner, to a great success; it is embracing the new method from the excellent athletes that helps Jimmy Li create his special set “Jimmy Li Jump”.Furthermore, changing our mind and listening to the new ideas from others is conducive to cooperate with other people. A man cannot succeed without the assistance from others. An open mind for new ideas and thoughts are easy for people to share different ideas, therefore, it is beneficial for cooperating within certain groups or teams. A cooperative people would certainly get more help, thus to succeed in a more earlier way. However, an open mind for outside ideas is surely the only way for one to succeed, for there are a lot of other people gaining success through other ways!

  Being tenacious and persistent represent a continuous effort in one’s specific career. The secret to happiness is hard work and effort, not “quick-fixes”. Great ideas only cannot guarantee one’s efforts and actions. Only by the down-to-earth efforts and hard work can the final success gained! If James Dyson did not experiment for over 5200 times after he got a new idea from others, we would not have witnessed the birth of this new and highly efficient vacuum cleaner. Therefore, tenacity and persistence provide a sure way to one’s success.

  Furthermore, a positive and optimistic attitude towards failure can also serve as a facilitator for one’s success. A lot of people failed because they feared the new challenges or feared to fail again. People with negative attitudes may be loath to take action even if they embrace new ideas from others. A positive mindset can serve as a catalyst for one’s success. If James Dyson didn’t hold hopes for his production promotion and give up during his experiment, we would have seen his products prevail the global market. Thus, a sound mindset and positive attitude propels one to success.

  In a nutshell, a successful person is not made just in one day. A lot of factors contribute to a successful people, like new ideas, tenacity and a positive mind, to name just a few. Only in this way can a person expect success as soon as possible!

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