2015年11月28日
Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on the reasons about the death of Ichthyosaurs. The writer puts forward three theories, which are opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that they died of toxic algae. while the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle. According to him/her, the fossils of ichthyosaurs show that they died in different time. Some were formed earlier than others.
Secondly, the passage states that they stranded in shallow water. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that According to the seafloor, it was deep water in the past.
Last, the writer argues that they were preserved in a pattern by other creatures. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. These nine bones were put in order; however, this creature only put them at random.
托福独立写作题目：
独立写作：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for the government to spend money on art museum and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.
11月28日托福独立写作解析：
作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for the government to spend money on art museum and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.
题型类别:政府投资类
写作思路：今天的题目又是一道老题，属于比较简单的题目。题目中出现了比较，同学们记得在段落中出现比较的感觉，可以采取段内比较，也可以采取段间比较。平时注意积累政府投资类话题的素材，政府拨款有哪些表达都要比较清晰。
写作指导：
单边相比较艺术，游泳池和操场对于人们的日常生活更加重要。 并不是所有的人都有对艺术的天赋和兴趣(talent & interest)。对于大部分人来说，艺术都是比较高雅而且难懂的(lofty and even elusive)，需要人们有大量的知识以及对于音乐的品味才能去理解和欣赏(truly understand and appreciate)。 但是做运动就相对简单很多，而且在公众当中也更加普及。每一个人都可以找到一个适合他的年龄以及状态的运动。
艺术设施通常建造的价格更昂贵。 一个豪华的现代音乐厅需要精心的装修，舒适的座椅，精致的灯光,顶尖的音乐渲染效果(elaborate decoration, comfortable seats, exquisite lighting and top-notch sound rendering system)，用相同的资金，政府可以建造更多的操场，购置更多的简易运动器材。
音乐博物馆和音乐厅需要收较高的费用。只有这样他们才能维持日常的运作，投资大型的表演和节目。但是与此同时，反而驱赶走了一部分普通的不能承担起昂贵门票(turning away many ordinary but genuine art lovers)的艺术爱好者(turning away many ordinary but genuine art lovers)。但是相反，公共的娱乐设施通常成本较低，即使收入较低的人也能够承担的起( more accessible to people with limited financial means.)。
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