2015年9月12日
2015年9月12日
Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on how to prevent the jellyfish from booming. The writer puts forward three measures to address the problem, which are opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that Plpyp can be destroyed by using chemicals. while the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle. According to him/her, The remains of polyp would breed the next generation quickly. Besides, using chemical ways might destroy other species in the marine or other places.
The second method is to harvest them for human consumption. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that only 12 kinds of jellyfish are edible. And people can only eat one percent of them.
Last, the writer argues that the government makes stricter regulation, letting workers clean the ballast water.. It is reported that the office of Adam once got fire. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. Boat companies and fishmen are unwilling to do so, for it wastes a lot of time and has a negative influence on their economic profits.
2015年9月12日托福独立写作真题解析：
作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to succeed, it is better to be more like others than different from everyone else.
写作思路：
本次考试的写作题目不难，也是平时在准备当中经常会看到的比较类的题目。需要注意的是当题目出现比较，段落内部需要将双方内容适当进行比较，否则文章就不是很严谨。对于这种二选一类的题目，如果单边想不出三个点，可以采取让步，适当描述对方观点的一个好处。这样文章不仅能够更加充实，字数更容易达到要求，而且更具有辩证性思维。
写作指导：
Disagree
让步
商业领域，与别人不一样才能更好地抢占市场。那些一直发行过时的产品的公司很快会被淘汰。 而那些特立独行的才能取得成功。比如苹果公司的电脑，当一般的公司都在关注运行速度，苹果公司与众不同的把关注点放在外观，界面上，这个大胆的突破让苹果公司占领了大部分的年轻人市场。
艺术领域，与别人不一样才能抓住别人的眼光。比如说著名的艺术家梵高，与别人的画风不同，他加入了自己的想象，运用了大胆的色彩，最后在艺术领域有了巨大的成功。
诚然，创新也会有风险。一方面，研发成本很高，造成资源浪费，另一方面也可能造人别人的不理解。但是和最后巨大的成功相比，这些困难完全可以忽视。
文指导：
Success is something that everyone is in pursuit of. Some claim that being more like other is highly likely to be successful, for people can draw others’ experience, thus avoiding making mistakes. However, I believe that being different from others can achieve more accomplishments.
Consider business field. Companies that only keep producing outdated products would be kicked out because of peer companies’ fierce competition. However, those who are always different from others can achieve great success. Take Apple company as an example. Unlike all other computer companies who consider hardware quality, running speed and processing efficiency as the most conspicuous strategies to attract customers, Apple Company wisely take an unconventional step, paying more attention to appearance, especially when all computers had similar hardware and application. Apple Company designed Macbook with unique metallic texture cover, friendly interface and fantastic animation, all of which quickly catch consumers’ eyes. Apple’s market share soared after the release of Macbook. 8 out of 10 students chose Macbook in colleges, for it represents professionalism and fashion. The success of Apple company should be attributed to its uniqueness and creativeness.
This is the same case with art arena. At Vincent Van Gogh’s age, the tendency of painting is focusing on realism. Every painter applied perspective, anatomy skills and the natural relationship between light and shadow to depict objects as accurately as possible. On the contrary, Vincent van Gogh, regardless of the orthodox style, tried to concentrate on subjective image and intended to express his own feelings and illusions. By pursuing his own painting style, he established the foundation of postimpressionism. Not only did he paint many works that so many people appreciate, but also many museums collected as their valuables. Had Van Gogh not insisted on his own way, he would not have become so successful.
Admittedly, keeping different may have drawbacks. The individuals who come up with new ideas possibly have to face the risk of losing acceptance of others, and companies who do not follow the conventional way have to pour a large amount of money in researching and developing brand new products. However, compared with the ultimate success, these difficulties are minor issues.
All in all, only when one is different from others can he/she stand out from the crowded.
词汇拓展：
Orthodox 正统的
Conventional传统的
Perspective 透视法
Anatomy 解剖学
Illusion 幻想
Regardless of 不管…
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